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Spider-Man Movie by RAM by robertmarzullo

Very very good spidey my friend! Your unique style really shines through here while also portraying certain similarities to many of the...

Hulk And Wolverine by Robert A. Marzullo by robertmarzullo

Great work ram! But I do have one little problem. I feel that hulk doesn't look as powerful as he should. It kinda takes the BAM! from ...

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So yah, I suck at first-person POV stories... Oh, and I kinda suck at life, too. But that's beside the point!

Yah, I'm attempting to write a Halloween-themed short story from the character -Stephen CRANE (eh?)- point of view and it starts off really well... But then there's dialogue. I find combining dialogue and FPPOV extremely challenging.

I guess it gets complicated for me at the point where you have to explain that that character just said that and he said it like THAT and whatnot. Cuz I'm really great at dialogue, but really bad at connecting it all... If that makes sense.

I.e.-
"Hey, you wanna catch a movie on Friday?" I said nervously.
"Sure..! Pick me up at eight." answered Becky with a wink.

GAH. I dunno. Maybe I'm just overreacting to it. It could be fine... It seems too simple..
Or it could just be because I haven't written anything except essays in FOREVER..

Meh. How y'all doing?
  • Listening to: My brother stomping around
  • Reading: Comic books
  • Watching: You through your bedroom window ;)
  • Playing: Dead space 2 :o
  • Eating: YO MOMMA
  • Drinking: Water. I guess...

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Matt Stevens
Artist | Student | Traditional Art
United States
Hey guys. I'm Matt. I'm 16. I'm a traditional artist
Mainly focusing in pencil and ink drawing, sketches, traditional multimedia(charcoal, colored pencil, paint, pencil,
Pen, etc..). I'm big on comic book art. So, be warned. You're gonna see a lot of that! But no worries, it's all awesome!
I try to update my journals regularly, so be on the lookout for those:D I'm always writing something cool or crazy over there. I'm always drawing, so I'll be posting new stuff frequently. I also dabble in writing stories, so, if you see those, make sure to check em out!
Thanks, and hopefully I'll see you on dA again later
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OneSheepArmy Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much for...uhmmm, everything? :D
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Mstevens15 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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FoxesandtheWolves Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fave
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Mstevens15 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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FoxesandtheWolves Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fave :XD:
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Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, Bro!!
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Mstevens15 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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Mralper Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
u have a good profile photo u look handsome:)
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Mstevens15 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Lawl
Thank you, it's my... Natural look. I wake up like that xD
Thanks for the watch!
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Mralper Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD actuallty ı was commending someone elses art but ı saw ur comment and profile photo and ı really liked ıtı clicked on it and ı loved ur artwork good choice of photo never change ıt :)
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